In writing today we working on descriptive language..a little. The following paragraph needs to be re written using more descriptive language. The words in red are ones that should b changed, at a minimum. This is due tomorrow. Students had some time in class to work on this as well.
You are a high school student. Essay in one hand you go to class. "I'm done!" You smile. The teacher takes the essay out of your hands and throws it away. She says, "It's a day late!" You look at your hard work. The teacher did noit even look at it! The No Late Homework Rule is bad.
Rotation #1 is doing a similar assignment but they are writing to a prompt about persuading a company to give them a free trip to Disney Land. This too should only be a paragraph using descriptive language. This is also due tomorrow.
